It's very rough, and I honestly think it needs a lot of addittions, and a lot more trimming. Here's some ideas I have on what to do next with it:
Cut 1: Gen3- Adam stands up
Cut 2: Junk Room- Bobble walks into the room
Cut 3: Peaceful Afternoon- Guy riding unicycle over the ground, hits block.
Cut 4- Dance Robot Dance- Bobble starts the dance.
Cut 5- Blue- Pink picks up Blue from the ground
Cut 6- Junk Room- Bobble looking in shelf, ominous shadow.
Cut 7- Peaceful Afternoon- Guy hits ground while cat plays guitar to the end.
A lot shorter, to the point. We'll see how it works out I guess.
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